Edit (1/16/25):: I have redone these pages! The whole chapter will eventually be completely redone if you're reading this. Extra pages have also been added between some pages to pad out the chapter a bit and give some more information. Here is a side-by-side of the changes done to these pages. 

To see the older pages, please go HERE

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And here's the last page of this scene, After this I don't have any pages done so I'll be posting some unfinish until i can finish them which might be AFTER I move.